A Ghost Story

This 'short' story is actually for my Japanese language test...I, and my friend require to speak in Japanese and recorded in. It is need to be in a well made story... and around 10 minutes..but we got it carried away and made it up to 25 minutes...Well..enjoy it..(since i'm still learning Japanese, there is some grammar error)

Cara-cara memikat perempuan

feel free to choose u way

 Sering terpikir cara utk pikat perempuan? Di atas adalah cara utk ajak dia jd awek...tp bila aku tny member aku pendpt dia tntg ayat ni..mostly said.."poyo giler"...(aku sebenarnya xphm mksd poyo tu, perhaps aku mmg seorg yg poyo utk memahami erti poyo tu sendiri)...

this is wat u probably get from saying that..haha...

aku xprnh try ayt2 ni... sbb aku xde sbb nk try...(blm ada yg berkenan lg)..klau ada yg nk try..make sure that it is at ur on risk...

aku prnh tny kwn aku cnth ayt yg jiwang gile...confirm terpikat pny lh, dia kata" saya terpikat dgn budi bhs bhs awk, teringin nk tgk spjg hyt sy"..something like that lh..aku dh lupa..(dia xkata sbnr nye..dia sms..tp lbey krg r tu..)..tp klau ko pkai ayat ni sama mksd dgn ko ajk dia bertunang..

aku prnh dgr satu ceramah ustaz ni dia nk couple dia jumpe trus mak awek tu..(awek tu skang adalh bini dia)...lpas tu mak awek tu kata bley xde hal..tp bwk jumpe mak ayah dia jumpe dtg jumpe dulu...(aku sgt kagum lg respect dgn ustaz tu)...

akhir kata dgn kata dr seorg wanita dipetik dr website iluvislam.com,
"sesungguhnya aku mencari lelaki yang akan menerima segala kekurangan dan dia membetulkan segala kesilapan ku..dan tidak memuja ku...atas apa yang zahir dri mata kasar..terimalah aku..bimbinglah aku...aku hanya wanita yang hidup di akhir zaman yang cuba menanam semangat serikandi-seikandi dahulu"